If someone listens to a song
And she appears in the verse
Not summoned, not expected
Just felt, like a breeze through a half-open window
Then that is love in its gentlest form …
Not loud, not declared
But tucked between notes
Where memory breathes, and the heart still knows
What it never forgot …
And if they play it again
Not to relive the past
But to feel her near
Just once more …
Alas, the song fades!
But somewhere in its echo
lives a moment
They never said goodbye to …
I was listening to a song when a sudden thought settled in, if someone ever hears a song and thinks of me, isn’t that one of the most deeply emotional and sacred gestures?
That moment stayed with me, and I ended up writing ‘When a Song Remembers Her’ … It doesn’t follow any structure or rhyme, but it holds something personal, love, memory, longing …
Maybe it’s a poem. Maybe it’s just a feeling shaped into words. I’m not entirely sure …
But I wonder, what do you think, can something like this be called a poem? Or does a poem need rules to be real, or can it simply be a moment that moves us?
Also, I’m just wondering about you, have you ever heard a song and found someone gently returning to your heart through it?
Tell me,
Isn’t it beautiful how music remembers what we try to forget?
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yes, musical notes to bring the past memory of a loved one into the forefront of our present. It can be beautifully touching or emotionally painful. I have many songs that conjure forth loved ones. It is a lovely way for music to inspire us and recollect the beauty of what once.
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Music is a sort of memory for us, or at least it feels that way. I’m sure that there are people in my past who think of me when they hear certain songs – hopefully, good things! – just as I think about them when I hear a particular piece of music. And since music is eternal, then that must make us – in some small way – immortal.
A melancholy and relatable poem, Roksana.
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Nice 👍
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Thank you Shashwat!
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These goodies from old melodic hits, beautiful piece of writing Roksana
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Yes, I fall for these goodies every time I hear those old melodic hits. They carry so much emotion, don’t they?
And it’s such a pleasure to have you on my blogpost! Thank you for your kind words.
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Likewise Roksana nice tool see you.
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