
It was raining here …
She called him with a cup of coffee in her hand.
It was raining there too …
He received the call with a cup of coffee in his hand.
She said, ‘What are you doing?’
He said, ‘I’m drinking coffee and watching the rainstorm. And you?’
She said, ‘I’m drinking coffee too by the window, watching the raindrops falling on the trees in my garden. Enjoying it.’
He said, ‘How’s your treatment going on?
She said, ‘fine.’
He said, ‘Well, that’s good to know. Why did you call now?’
She took a moment. Then …
She said, ‘I missed you.’
He took a moment. Then …
He said, ‘Do you miss me just as a friend or as a guy?’
She said, ‘As a guy!’
He took a pause. Smiled a little bit.
She took a sip from her coffee cup as if to relax a bit with the words spoken finally to him.
The pouring rain was making a beautiful breeze.
They both felt it on their way.
From here to there.
From there to here.
He said, ‘I’m done with the house. I even sleep here sometimes. It’s pretty. I did a pretty nice job.’
She said, ‘I plan to visit soon.’
He said, ‘What?’
She said, ‘May be in about ten days. Next weekend!’
He said, ‘Why are you coming? Are you coming to jump into the sea here? Don’t you even think so. You’ll freeze to death, you know. The water gets cold in winter. You know that, na?’
She said, ‘Why are you saying this and that? Why will I jump into the sea? I’ll be coming to visit you. Not for any other reason.’
He said hurriedly, ‘Okay. Let’s hang up. I’m busy.’
Then he smiled a sweet smile after such a long time.
Then he started singing, ‘If you ever need me, just give me a call. I’ll run over to you whenever. Whether it’s raining or hail-storming, I don’t care.’
Then she smiled a sweet smile as if she was hearing his song. 🎵
It was raining here.
It was raining there.
Their conversation was going on and on …
In the rain.


Beautiful piece of conversation
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I’m so glad that you read this one …
It’s a bit longer verses than what I usually write. And these pieces are the rare piece of my writing ….
And this one,
This one is completely an imaginary conversation story. And my personal favourite …. Most loved one …
♥️♥️
Thanks once again for keeping the patience to read these long conversations 😊
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I really loved it and seriously I thought of my piece of writing after reading this I also use to write romantic lyrics and smiley with nature and happiness. Will try to write again and once again this is a great piece of writing and I felt very good after reading this 💜
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I fall in love reading subtle sophisticated simple romantic lyrics … and so tried to create something like that …
Thank you so much for penning down your thoughts while reading it and finding the inspiration to write again such romantic lyrics ….
I’m sure you can do better …
Feeling good part is where I felt good as well
Happy and grateful.
😊
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Yea exactly if someone is happy to read you it means your purpose for writing is solved ☺️
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Exactly 😊
Thank you ♥️
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Thanks and keep on writing these ones are really beautiful ❤️
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Thank you …
I wish to write … just not writing now …
I’ve few drafts though …
Let me give those sometime for finer tuning as per my ability and imagination and then sharing with you all …
Wish me luck 😊
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All the very best I just keep on writing instantly when someone motivates me with their writings as you have done just , so look at my latest post from nature to love
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One feels the complexity of a conversation. She is seeking the warmth togetherness can bring. He’s hesistent.
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Why is he hesitant?
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He is protecting himself. We betray one another. 🌷
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Great post
And it’s raining here 🥰 but no she
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Oh no! These days, it’s raining so heavily here as well! Hope all is fine at your end…
No she,
She ll be …
Thank you Obong Eno.
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It’s fine, thank you too 🥰
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