My heart is full of many things to say to you
But I feel speech is nothing to you at all …
I believe
We shall surely see each other someday
Though I’m afraid I wouldn’t deliver the observations
So far I’ve made ….
The emotions that’s touching me these days,
In moments so weird ….
I believe
Love is an act of forgiveness
A tender look that may become
So sad
But what do I do out of it?
My tender look is my
Strange habit ….
I believe
My undefined patience
And the passion of my angels
Give me much relief
Cause I know you …
Although you show your indifference
But I bet it’s only out of love,
Not hate …
Then suddenly
I get this bittersweet feeling of onsra, that whatever little we have is coming to a close
My heart is full of many things to say to you
But I feel speech is nothing to you at all
Tell me if I’m wrong ….
Onsra/ boro
(n.) the bittersweet feeling of loving for the last time, or realizing your love won’t last
Lovely poem RA !!!
Great job
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Hello Devang …. Lovely to hear from you here on Onsra …
Thank you so much🙏♥️🎉🤲😊🥳 And to tell you the truth, the people around me is wondering why I’m smiling so big at my phone while writing now 🤩
How’re you today?
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Ohhh that’s terrifying 😨
I’m great every day. What about you?
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I’m great everyday too ….
😀
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Beautiful ♥️♥️♥️
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Sublime!
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Awesome.
Now I am speechless to express my praising words for your such a beautiful poem.
You are absolutely right.
happy to see your lively poem. Says many things. does not require speech.
Excellent.
Best wishes and regards.
🙏🙏🙏Arun
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Thank you Thank you Arun Ji.
Your words are making me smile 😊
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Smile 😊
Beautiful lines can come out of beautiful ❤️ and mind.
Best wishes 🙏😊
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Best wishes to you too ….
Take care
🙏🤲🎉✨
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🙏😊🙏
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make woo me and you
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Your words go up in my head …
A bit explaining would be helpful 😃
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This poem captures the essence of love and its complexities. The emotions expressed are relatable and beautifully written. The concept of ‘onsra’ adds a unique touch, making it even more impactful. Well done!✨❤💖
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Initially I wanted to give the title as ‘Unspoken Speech’, then I found the word ‘Onsra’.
Oh! How I loved that word instantly …
There is a beauty in the turns and twists of words here and there and there you get a new perspective always ….
‘Love’ is such a beautiful emotion- it always seems less no matter how many ways you express it …
Thank you for your kind comment.
Like painting, to me, poetry/ poem seems unfinished always.
You readers give the finishing touch by your kind words for it, and that’s where I feel humbled and inspired…
Thank you once again.
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Beautifully expressed emotions about the title choice and the power of words in ‘Onsra’. Poems, like paintings, always feel unfinished until readers like us add the finishing touch with our kind words. Truly humbled and inspired by your poetry. Thank you.
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I appreciate you saying that …
😊
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