A Letter to Beloved

Can you perceive
An unseen bond between us?
It ties us together; trust it, my love …
It’s invisible, yet unmistakably sensed
Certainly by me …
Do you not sense it as well?
A connection surpassing time and distance…
Ours is an endless bond
Our eternal, cherished blessing …

Through moments fleeting and forever
The thread weaves its way …
Stretching, sometimes tangling,
Yet resilient, unyielding …
As time, as it is infinite, it will stay …

Oh, my beloved, my dear …
Please pardon me, the mistake was mine
Throughout the moments we shared
And the clarity we’ve known …
It took me a while
To fully understand your essence …

Now I know
This love endures, and
Time, place, circumstance may shift,
This love is unbroken, my constant uplift …

Cherish caring hearts; love’s true wealth …

I’m uncertain if the title fits these verses. Do you have a suggestion?

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30 thoughts on “A Letter to Beloved”

  6. The unseen bond, Yes I can see it through your poetry- you have already written “unseen bonds” in poem. Or we say it is like “unseen threads” becoz we are tied with bond of love….soo aesthetic poem😊🫶

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    1. Wow…
      You’ve proposed a few of intriguing titles for my verses;

      Unseen Bonds
      Unseen Threads

      Thank you, dear Himanshi. Your insights impressed me …

      Wishing you a fantastic day! 🔆😊♥️

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    1. Thank you dear Richard …
      Sometimes it happens that you write something and you rewrite it and rewrite it again and then you feel better about it –
      My ‘A Letter to Beloved’ is one such piece- over the entire process from the beginning to its end, I was a bit nervous though –
      Overall, it’s a delicate feeling …

      Thank you RB ….
      I appreciate your feed here ….

      😊

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    1. Yes I understand
      In this vast world of writers community, we need each other’s love, support and constructive feedback to go forward, be inspired and to make the best out of ourselves …

      Thank you Adarsh …

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      2. It’s generous of you to say so. Thank you, Adarsh.

        While writing might not be my strongest suit, I really enjoy delving into the wonderful verses crafted by all of you …. it inspires me also ….

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      3. And that’s the best way to connect with a similar mindset of people where they appreciate your writings or art craft to motivate you to be a better version of yourself ❤️

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