Between my
Breaths and heartbeats
Your name echoes
Always in my mind …
In the morning light
In the depths of night
You are always in my thoughts …
Every fleeting second
Every whispered breeze
Carries a piece of you …
If you ever forget
If doubts ever cloud your mind
Know this truth:
I am never not thinking of you …
For you’re my constant muse …
Thanks so much Roksana ❤️
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You’re my musing 💜
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Very poetic comment!
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Same as you
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Thank you!
It’s wonderful to find someone who appreciates the beauty of words just as much …
Feeling humbled and grateful …
But you’re doing a great job in writing some very romantic free flowing verses and poems and your other insights are also very inspiring
Keep it up Adarsh!
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Everything he is singing in this song are poetic lies!
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I agree 😀
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I love the flow and rhythm of this poem, Roksana. The words rush by like the passion they convey.
I’m curious if you’ve ever considered putting your words to music. I think they’d make wonderful love songs.
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Thank you so much for your kind words! I’m happy that you enjoyed the poem …
Really? I have never actually thought about setting my poems to music before!! But I may consider doing it. It’s indeed a great idea. How is it done? Suggest me some if you know …
You’re so inspiring, RB …
My poems into love songs might be a wonderful new avenue to explore!
Wishing you wonderful weekend with art, music and poetry and all things that bring peace in your life – ✨🔆
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I wish I could offer you advice on how to get started with songwriting, but I don’t have much experience there. Perhaps someone else in your circle of friends may play an instrument. Collaboration can be a wonderful creative experience.
Thank you for the kind well-wishes. Hoping you have a wonderful and creative weekend, as well.
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Thank you Richard for your response!
I appreciate your suggestion and will definitely reach out to my friends to explore on this …..
Your encouragement means a lot. Wishing you a fantastic and inspiring weekend, too!
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In the morning light
In the depths of night
~ love these lines.
— Oh to be a gifted writer like you, dear Amelia. Lucky us, we get to enjoy your sweetest sentiments, beautifully composed and placed before us — like a banquet to relish!
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Wow!
What a heartfelt compliment …
Loved this sweetheart! It means a lot to me ….
I’m happy and grateful to share my words and verses and paintings and journey of life with such a wonderful audience like you, a great writer and poet ….
❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Oh what a lovely poem
Beautiful work.
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Thank you Devang.
I’m happy you enjoyed the poem …
I wrote it two days ago 😊
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How’re you? How’s your heart Devang?
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I’m fine
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Good!
Don’t forget to smileeeee 😊
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