I love the mystery in you
A quiet depth, like a still lake at dusk
Holding reflections that shift with every glance
The shadow you cast
Is not absence but presence
A soft veil over what could be, inviting me to wonder, not to solve …
You are a riddle
Pieces scattered like stars in a wide open sky
Each clue a whisper of meaning, yet the answer stays just out of reach …
A whirlwind stirs within you
Not chaos but motion
Drawing me closer, only to spin me into wonder again …
You are a mystery box
Sealed with care and quiet allure
Its weight a promise of something unseen
Waiting for those who dare to open without haste …
And yet, I do not seek to solve you
For the beauty lies in not knowing
To stand at the edge of your mystery is a wonder enough for me …
The word “Mystère” comes from the Latin word “mysterium,” meaning “secret” or “something hidden.”
The unknown can be beautiful and fascinating in its own right
What do you say?
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it’s misterio in spanish and means the same thing. This poem is beyond captivating! Luv how this poem can be applied to many subjects — a cloud, a mountain, a moon. You should be adding these to s book. They’re too exceptionally beautiful for a small audience. I would be happy to buy.
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Thank you Stefie
Such a heartwarming comment!
I’m thrilled you feel this way about the poem! Your precious comment on my verses means the world to me, my dear!
I love the idea of a book, it’s something I’ve been thinking about too ♥️
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Yay, a book would last a long time — forever 🌟🌟💟💟
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i said rock and roll spring time
take two
me and you
you and i
not real
feel
angry
dissappointed
lament
despite
my initial intent!
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That’s a lovely compliment. I hope someone receives it one day.
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Ahh! What a beautiful comment!
Thank you Ian J Myers!
I’m sure the right person will receive it one day. As you know some compliments are just waiting for the perfect moment …
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Everything looks so green and lush in your video…and a beautiful day for a walk!
I think this is one of your finest poems, Roksana. The imagery is lovely, a painting with words. Very well done. 🙂
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Thank you Richard! You’re always so kind with your words for my verses and paintings! It means a lot to me
Writing it felt like painting with feelings, and I’m happy it connected with you. Feeling truly humbled and grateful!
Have a wonderful day! Smile & shine ✨
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